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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-24 12:03 PM




silver veil of mist
tiptoes over azure waves
melancholy night

fog horn’s mournful cry
silver mists on restless sea
searching for the shore

pale morning mist
reaching for the blue above
blankets sleeping earth

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-07-24 07:40 AM


Cheryl,
what lovely haiku's what lovely images.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2002-07-24 09:46 AM


this takes you to an abandoned lighthouse somewhere near Portsmouth...good series here


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2002-07-24 09:58 AM


Che'

domo haikugoto...

perfect images ms

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2002-07-24 09:59 AM


This is just glorious and how much I love the picture. Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
5 posted 2002-07-24 10:06 AM


This was simply lovely. Your imagery added dimension to the photo.
vandana
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USA
6 posted 2002-07-24 10:32 AM


enjoyed
BloomingRose
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Florida
7 posted 2002-07-24 06:11 PM


Lovely poem with nice imagery.
Enjoyed!

Deb

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