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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2002-07-23 11:21 AM




I am thrashing in a sea of torment..
waves crashing against my soul.
The current is pulling me under,
and the misery is taking it's toll.

I can't stay afloat to swim to the shore,
I know now, just what to do.
I will relax, and struggle no more.
I will drown in the sea deep and blue.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2002 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
1 posted 2002-07-23 11:22 AM


Very sad... I feel like this sometimes.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
2 posted 2002-07-23 11:24 AM


Obviously you made your way to the shore...

nice poem Kitty!

Love, Light and Happiness...

Neeraja

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