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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were thirst quench hymns in water mouth you sang to me in your girl voice sinless and taught me the sounds of your kiss words with the sincerity of lipstick laughter the watching people behind trees made window eye sounds wanting to know if your heart would fit there in my hands but I hid it under my shirt like treasure you brought me cold sodas from the bend over and wrote bad words in the dust on the door with out your hands you were a preacher I prayed for the earth to be mirrors my leather made blessing voice rhymes when you shared the bare of your thighs in hurry sit beside to fit inside my sides when you pinned chosen on my pockets and told me how many men went to heaven ©Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and told me how many men went to heaven ah Ds, thats darn good stuff.... it seems to me that line says alot with just a few words. Waving and sippin coffee from across the states.... good morning dark one. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Though you entitled this darkwood conversation I saw instead a summer meadow of shadows and girl laughter with boy chuckles following...you lent an innocence to this that I am sure you do not see, but it is there, nonetheless.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
donna, thanks babe for the read, you are a sweet set of eyes sunshine, good morning ms day light. yes I did see the innocent hon.....the location was darkly wooded in my view...perhaps the old tent revival in the woods setting...as always, thank you for your eyes [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-23-2002 08:51 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
if your heart would fit there in my hands but I hid it under my shirt like treasure =========================================== with out your hands you were a preacher I prayed for the earth to be mirrors ======================================== in all the unigue imagery and verbiage that is so much a part of your poetry that I have come to admire(the way your poetic mind connects to your pen)...but sometimes its the quiet moments of your heart speaking to your muse that is what I find most impressive. those above lines prove my point.  How she loves me, I dont understand |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And a heavenly good morning to you too Dark.. You are one amazing writer.. but, I have the feeling.. I have said that before. ~slow hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
janet marie...thanks hon...they say heartspeak is the wordless language...(wink) you are a treat to my efforts ms, sincere thanks always ms Enchantress, big hugs and grins to you little lady with magic, thanks to you for your peek in and whispers [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-23-2002 08:51 AM).] |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
A truly amazing and intriguing piece of work! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 feel like taking a ride??  you have more than a gift ya know.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ 'the watching people behind trees made window eye sounds wanting to know if your heart would fit there in my hands but I hid it under my shirt like treasure' Remarkable ... thank you for letting me peek through your voyeuristic words~  What a 'treasure' indeed ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS "if your heart would fit there in my hands but I hid it under my shirt like treasure" It seems the dawn has blessed you with a treasure of words. Hugs from the SG Valley. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mycafe, so wonderful of you to visit, thanks to you lauren, you are a gift babe, thank you for being you and for your moments here. Marge, bless you lady friend for your read and reply, so pleased to capture for your thoughts. ms martie, Hi lil neighbor, big hugs to the SG valley girl from the gray side of the beach, thanks to you sweet ms |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I enjoyed your wonderful muse very much..I agree with all the others that you are gifted with the golden pen! smiles..I am glad I caught this piece ya made my morning brighter! Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, such heavenliness always fills your words! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CSK, thanks to you friendly friend poet, glad you enjoyed the write noah, you are always a pleasure to have reply words from loner...thanks to you so much |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
you were thirst quench hymns in water mouth you sang to me in your girl voice sinless and taught me the sounds of your kiss words with the sincerity of lipstick laughter Oh my Dark..what more could a gal want than to quench someone's thirst in such a way. You write with such chainlinked words..not one could do without the other. Yes..heartspeak..a treasure. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina when you read my offerings and press them breastward I am soft sided in reply your friendship is wet gold babe |
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