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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-22 04:30 PM


What would it be if everything
were different
Leopards without spots
a world where no color could be seen
not a single drop of technology
no color not even black or white
everything a clear dusty haze

The pros would be just 1 or 2
1. No racism
2.nothing the cause hate

The cons would be many
I give you just a few
Boredom
communication
no internet

but we could all get used
to having no more hate
guess what it isn't too late
so open up your gate
and let yourself relate

© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-22 04:31 PM


I like the words spoken. very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
2 posted 2002-07-22 04:48 PM


I liked this very much. A world without hate is such a novel idea. However, no colors....hmmmm...not too sure I could deal with my garden being a haze.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

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