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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-22 04:25 PM


When I look at me I see
a light inside of me
I see my past, present, and future me
thats about as far as I can see

I see innosense of a young child
happy and hyper as can be
an aspiring friend
shining brightly among the stars

I see todays a hearts full time
a friend to all
love taken to the fullest
innosense stripped away
like dirty laundry not yet washed

married with 4 kids
a kiss from Dan everyday
a job well done
a teacher, the very best one

when I look at me I see
a very bright future ahead of me

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-22 04:29 PM


Sounds like a very good future to me. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-07-22 07:42 PM


Kellie~
Atta gal ~
I like your forward-looking visions~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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