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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2002-07-22 03:07 PM


I remember once when you were young
how you couldn't be found that day
until the neighbor finally called
you had went to their house to play.

A beautiful blonde hair lil girl
with a twinkle in your eye
picking daisies for your mom
chasing lightnin bugs across the sky.

Then there was that day in Pappys yard
for his birthday we gathered to share
then the sudden squeel of tires
and how it gave us all a scare.

You are no longer a lil' girl
but you'll always be the baby{like me}
each day I watch you grow
from that child into a lady.



Staci Happy Birthday.


Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-22-2002 03:18 PM).]

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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-07-22 03:10 PM




YAY!!! Awwwwwwww, HAPPY BIRTHDAY STACI!!! (kiss on cheek) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, I know she will cry reading this and will cherish this to her heart forever, God Bless You both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2002-07-22 03:14 PM


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank u aunt donna this was just wonderful! thanks so much!!!

~i kept the right ones out and let the wrong ones in~ Aerosmith~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2002-07-22 09:35 PM


This is about as lovely a birthday present as anyone could hope to get.  All I get are ties and socks. LOL  Beautiful way to say it AND show it.  Happy Birthday Spinegrinder!
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-07-22 09:36 PM


Cute

Cold hands means a warm heart

Goodknight
Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2002-07-22 09:37 PM


a beautiful birthday poem - I liked it lots - such a inviting way to offer us a view of the life of a birthday - thanks Paul
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