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Gave Our Souls Away
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Gave Our Souls Away |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
You made love to me for hours And never looked away You gave me your soul as never before I'll never forget the day Though this was Oh so long ago You love me more in many ways For again you made love to me for hours And to me gave your soul away I made love to you for hours And never looked away I gave you my soul as never before I know you know the day Though this was Oh so long ago I love you more in many ways For again I made love to you for hours And to you gave my soul away [This message has been edited by Zinsser (06-13-2002 11:55 PM).] |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
Quite nice. The repetition makes it very sweet. Thanks for reminding us that things do work, sometimes! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
nicely said - nicely crafted - engaging topic - a good poem - I liked it - Paul |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Beautiful! If we cannot give our souls away, then what is the purpose of love? I truly enjoyed this Zinsser, so close to the heart! Well done!  |
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