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Guardurthoughts
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0 posted 2002-07-22 03:08 AM



Each kiss that danced upon her angelic lips was but a kiss from the devil.
As he looked at her, she could see the lust as it began to rim his eyes: It was as if Dracula was in him.
Her heart ignored it, she was scared and in love.
Love to him was nothing but a pity game meant to be won.
The aroma of the candles burning around her combined with the scent of his body
left her mind senseless and weak…..And he could see it when her body trembled.
She looked at him once more before she would fall for the spell he was putting on her.
To her surprise she didn’t see the man she fell in love with, she saw a scared, lost little boy.
……. She smiled, looked into the boy’s eyes and said “ I love you”

The wild flames that danced in the man’s eyes suddenly went Icy Cold, He no longer saw a girl but a woman, a woman asking a man to love her in return.

He wrapped her in a gentle embrace, and sighed.

He said a little prayer that night a prayer he hoped would be first class mail, He prayed for forgiveness.

He prayed so that he could understand the true meaning of what love meant.

He understood…. He had been given an angel….. While she was sleeping he gently whispered in her ear,” I love you my angel, thank you for letting me see. “

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

© Copyright 2002 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
CrAzY8
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1 posted 2002-07-22 01:15 PM


Nice poem, shows alot of emotion and I enjoyed it very much!!!


[This message has been edited by CrAzY8 (07-23-2002 02:15 AM).]

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2 posted 2002-07-22 02:16 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Erica, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry reading it because I want to be loved like this and have my Joanna close to my heart! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2002-07-23 02:12 AM


this, I love
bumping it up

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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