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True Love's Calling (by me and Tiersdin -- we so poetic!)
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True Love's Calling (by me and Tiersdin -- we so poetic!) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Lie with me here, quietly, and explore landscapes set before you. Let me climb the ridges of your heart. Engulf me in your arms, devour my fears upon your lips I need the sunlight of your kiss, my love. My kiss is yours, an endless rainbow upon your palate. The snow of your rainy fragrance heals my slowing touch. Catch me as I surrender hidden treasures of my seasons into your beautiful hands... Your fingers place and remove shadows. From the treeline's hold, your delectable sweetness fills me, leaving me trembling as a new leaf upon love's vine... I taste the grapes of your maddening love. I drink the bitter-sweet of your passionate tears A draught of wine for all we have still yet to share. There's so much inside I have for you that mere words cannot compare. We explore the landscapes of the moon we share. Hold on my love, we're halfway there... I taste the ache of your eyes again. We feast upon our moans & our sighs again A meal made of the taste of our consent to defeat. This melting of souls into one makes us complete I succumb to the shape of our shade, in this landscape of our need. Water our love, my darling, watch us become like a firmly planted tree... Let me sit alone with you among your roots. I am newly blossomed fruit, partake of all you see... Dropped among this landscape of you and me. She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Didja guys do more verse for verse than line for line this time? 'Cause it seems more like that. Awesome read. As always.  written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's more like we wrote a mad jumble of words and somehow we formed it into a poem with form and structure later on. Tiersdin can corroborate that! Heh heh.She said burn ... together. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Anvril... I've read this and it's beginning to get tougher to figure out who's writing what... Mikey, you rule! *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hmm ... I *guess* that could be considered corroboration. On th' moon. LOLAlways a pleasure. She said burn ... together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I taste the grapes of your maddening love. I drink the bitter-sweet of your passionate tears A draught of wine for all we have still yet to share. Now that is what I call a love fest...and a picturesque poem filled with beautiful imagery...and yes you are both unbelievably fantasic poets...  ~ drunken hugs to both of youLyra |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
So very charming! Great job !! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Mikey! Lyra liked th' verse you took th' time to point out to me before posting! Cool. Rodents rock! written in blood before everything went black |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This is really nice, you two! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Something new -- Lori called me "Mikey." Glad you all enjoyed.She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (07-22-2002 11:49 AM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is good. . . I like it. . . yes, I like it a lot. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Sven! (man, I'm *years* late replying to this!  )Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Some interesting memories this one brings up, PS. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
And this was before my time here...Thanks PS for bobbing it into the present Awesome this Ed |
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shadowdreamer New Member
since 2005-12-31
Posts 1florida, U.S. |
awsome |
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