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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-21 11:21 PM



love trickled
streams of newness
over unchartered
regions of my body
revitalizing
all senses deep with in
percolating
rivers of love
flow from hidden
tributary


~~Abstract Renka~~

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards,

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-22 12:24 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love this wonderful form of poetry here, love always flows from your golden quill, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2002-07-22 09:26 PM


Do ya know just how sweet and sensual this is?  Yeah, I bet you do.  Nice to see a style that I am not familiar with (not by title anyway) but I feel as if I have been treated to a golden example of one.  I will definitely remember...Renka....Renka.....Renka.....
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-22 09:27 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
4 posted 2002-07-22 09:29 PM


this is a very sensual poem - wonderful water images that go so well with the flow of feelings you wash over me - thanks Paul
CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
5 posted 2002-07-23 04:39 AM


I am very delighted and very humbled to have your comments concerning this poem. While it is  a meditative kind of poem it does seek to touch both the writer and the reader bringing to mind different images all of which are to portray the feeling of love when it's new and yes sensual...And while this is a fav of mine...I can't seem to top the feelings of yhis one.
Many have not appreciated this piece so I am thrilled that all of you here liked it...
Now that is supreme satisfaction when your writing reaches somebody!
big smiles, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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