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Inquisitive Moon
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Inquisitive Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Inquisitive Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Questioning moon in a faraway sky Where do dreaming lovers fly Beyond the Milky Way for sure then 'round the stars in soft allure Glancing off moonbeams of phasing Gathering hearts ... so amazing How do you know what to do to make a heart-in-wish come true~ ~I thank BloomingRose for the 'instant inspire'~ Thanks, gal ... I needed that~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge I love poems with reference to the moon and you captured the love and romance of the moment so very well. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul’s song and writer of the moons magic, as always your way with words is outstanding. Never is there a pause in the flow of each line, each word placed in this dance of wordy delight with perfect precision. Again darling heart I’m spellbound by your magic. Beautiful weave of words darling heart, truly magnificent. If you continue to shine so, I shall be forced, against my normal reticence, to find something really magnificent to say, or write a poem for you, and you know how much I hate to do that. Either that or it will be my duty, no matter how distasteful that is to set you a really difficult challenge. Mmmmm ‘tis a good thing I adore you darling girl, or you’d be hanging from the yardarm by now. You know I s’pose that this is okay don’t you? Did I not tell you one day I would write that, I think it’s called the throw away line You only write so well because you can darling heart, and I can’t, your soft inspire makes me so eager for September. I enjoyed talking to you more beloved heart simply because you are YOU. Give Bill a kiss form me and tell him I’d give him one myself but my arms aren’t quite long enough. They will be in September though, hehehehe tis a good thing you love me isn’t it? Wink I love it when you shine the moon darling heart, did I tell you I LOVE THIS, I do utterly utterly utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: As lovely as the full moon herself! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely treat to read, Marge... ~ celestial hugsLyra |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
soft n lovely as your muse aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love the way you did this, Marge. And, the poem is so beautiful. As always! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very neat miss margie..  i like the thoughts in this one..!hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Really nice job Marge! Enjoyed it much! You know I love poems about the moon. Such a mysterious man who lives there. I Wonder if he is as handsome as he is alluring? Deb |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
P.S. For the inspire... anytime! You often inspire me as well.  Deb |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms marge.. it is lovely what you do with the display of words and mind prints |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, I love the way you are able to do these 'shape' poems. This one is particularly romantic and I enjoyed it very much. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
excellent poetry lovely presentation - lots of feelings while I read - just great - thanks Marge - Paul |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh this is perfect. Nothing like a beautiful full moon. Sandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beyond the Milky Way for sure then 'round the stars in soft allure ============================= Now THAT is something I can get into. Well put and beautiful poem from inspire to your pen. |
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