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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
August 31, 1997 One day in time One moment in an eternity and eveything changes One look of love One moment of anticipation and everything changes One second you were there a single tick of time and everything changes In one tender look you were smiling One blink of an eye and everything changes One flash of light a final comprehension of life and everything changes c1997SimplyGold |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..how very very true... How things can change forever, in the blink of an eye. Excellent thoughts here. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) And when one day may see so cloudy, may the next blink of an eye bring you sunshine and happiness forever! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love your poems, I just know like Lyra you already are a wonderful part of our poetic family, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This poem speaks words of truth Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh how true, Electra... Of course during these moments, some of the changes are good and some are bad... but it only takes a moment to change a life forever. ~ hugs of the momentLyra |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL, around our office, the one saying we hold to is that all the constants change... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you all for your comments and senitments. There are so many wonderful writings at this site. I am looking forward to my weekends now more and more. SimplyGold |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and we look forward to more of you! Welcome to our home, miss  |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
What a sad but wonderful piece. Personally I am not a fan of change, but like you say, everything can change in just one moment in time. I'd say this is a very touching piece, greatly enjoyable. "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, this was a sad moment. A day of realization. Thank you for your comments. Electra aka SimplyGold |
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