Open Poetry #21 |
With You In My Thoughts |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I could try to pen a love song But no words would ever do To tell of the deep devotion And of the love I have for you I feel you with me every day Your image soothes my aching heart As I remember with such fondess All the love you did impart So much love I have for you 'tho you're many miles away I hold on tightly to my memories Inside my heart they're locked away I'll light a candle to our love And keep the fire burning bright Thoughts of you will come to me As the day turns into night * * * * I dedicate this to my father who still remains my guiding light. I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (07-20-2002 06:55 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is the sweetest tribute. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And he will always be your guiding light, for nothing can ever change the deep love you share together! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Very sweet words of endearment Sue. Thank you. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
A wonderful poem - a wonderful tribute - I enjoyed the read very much - Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
A really special bond must exist between you & your father. This is so Great... Paul |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your lovely comments. When my father died I felt a part of me went with him, 'tho the love I hold dearly for him comforts me, especially on the days I'm feeling down. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: A beautiful poem. Your father would enjoy your work so much and who knows........just maybe he does! Betty Lou Hebert |
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