Open Poetry #21 |
Peace Of Mind |
LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Peace of Mind My peace of mind is found in a piece of my mind and heart a sanctuary of you and I locked deep in my solitude I keep you My peace of mind lies within the piece of mind which holds you In the darkest recess of me there lies a flickering light you you are my peace of mind Tai |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
In the darkest recess of me there lies a flickering light you you are my peace of mind wonderful thoughts Tai. Well done. *s* I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
interesting place that piece of mind..nice imagery |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
All I can say is awesome. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
My peace of mind is found in a piece of my mind I really like your play on words here, Tai nice poem! ~ pieces of hugs Lyra |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
*giggles* thank you all so much =) you're all too nice to me! *hugs to everyone* Thanks Tai |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...to have peace of mind...James |
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