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From Behind the Trees
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From Behind the Trees |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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There are views behind trees that are safer than those of any conflict menacing forest floors. In the absence of the now we are lost in past of cavaliers out to protect their maiden's hunted choice.. a fox on the run, a marmot on its dig to security. We know of the chase the victor is always up in arms against lesser causes that nature presents.. The hunter glorifies the expedition we remain lost in the foliage consumed by a past of pomp and decadence. With bodies present in a new century the message stays the same... whoever dares to fight the system creates both the admirer and enemy. There will never be an absence of cause only a feeling of getting lost in the woods of being snagged by the trees of life... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem!!!! Full of emotion Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks Julie, this comes from a poem on a painting I did a couple of years back, I modified it tonight |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Sir, Your poem is deep and thought provoking. What risks need to be taken, and how much of a benefit and enhancement can they be expected to become? Something we can not easily resolve--but should seek to determine for ourselves. You use of the trees & woods as imagry is interesting. P.S. Thank you also for reading & replying to my poem. After looking at your profile and going to your homepage, I conmsider it quite an honor to be commented on by you! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
your welcome deleeme, We shouldn't cease asking those questions, maybe it's time to answer too.. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-13-2002 09:55 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
With bodies present in a new century the message stays the same... whoever dares to fight the system creates both the admirer and enemy. So very true, Martin... a well done poem!  ~ hugs of rebellionLyra |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Oh I like this a lot- it makes you stop and really think about it. I loved the imagery. Enjoyed the read-thanks  Tai |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Lyra, Hugs of Rebellion too  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Lil Tai, That's the kind of stuff I write..and I'd like to encourage others to do the same |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Wonderful Metaphor usage. Enjoyed. [This message has been edited by sigheyes (06-13-2002 10:10 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks sigheyes for reading and commenting..look forward to reading your work too |
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