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D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-07-20 04:19 AM


My dream, I want you next to me
So hot I perspire in the satin sheets of love
Every night you join in my explorations
We have been the slayer of magical dragons
Which transform into butterflies with firefly eyes

In whispers of sighs floating in the sheets of imaginations
I have been looking for the fair maiden in delicate lace
Dancing in the bare feet of innocence
Upon clover impregnated with lavender desires

In translucent wings that shimmer in silver outlines
Meditating from afar in phantom eyes
Sending winds vibrating in search patterns
Her spells appear in visions to tempt the mind

Feathering vibrations of crystal wind chimes
Send gentle chimes calling on her spirit
To move in every closer spheres that I can gain strength from
But in ever infinitesimal small moves I lose too much time

But my quest must continue in my dream of fantasy
So I will devour ambrosia wine from a fruit tree of eroticism
Choosing my words well for my game of sexuality
Coming up with verse that will titillate the inner core

In hypnotic trances I have found the right words to speed up the process
But a woman way is never easy
Especially when you want her so close from so far
In eyes that seem to need you so
Walking away in side glances

So woman in my dreams, I must have been in training
Do not get jealous of the time I spend away from you
For my satin sheets now are hot with friction
But why are you storming so, within my closed eyes
Have I betrayed you?

D.Lester Young (07/20/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)



© Copyright 2002 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands
1 posted 2002-07-20 12:07 PM


Some dream.... enjoyed it!

Neeraja.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-07-20 05:08 PM


In whispers of sighs floating in the sheets of imaginations
I have been looking for the fair maiden in delicate lace
Dancing in the bare feet of innocence
Upon clover impregnated with lavender desires
just beautiful *s
M

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3 posted 2002-07-20 05:59 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is so beautifully sad, sweet friend, I know with a heart like yours you would never betray anyone, my heart goes out to you and I hope this is just fictional to your own experiences now! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-07-20 06:13 PM


Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-07-20 07:01 PM


even better a second time around...and I have to smile at the wind chime reference too...I think I have over 30 of them by now. I keep expecting the "wind chime" police to come and confiscate them!

beautiful work, Dave!

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