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Pegasus
Junior Member

since 2002-07-14

Posts 10
Oklahoma

0 posted 2002-07-19 11:49 PM

He is as the wind,
Gentle as a touch of a feather
on my face.
He is as the sun,
soothing, with warmth and passion,
He is as the moon
calming fears away in the pale light.

He gently moves my spirit
out among the flowers
among the grasses so green and sweet,
out from the dark shadows,
into the warmth of the light

Soaring above the mountain peaks
now a bird in flight,
dipping,diving and playing….
A bird, now flying free in the wind.

Pegasus

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2002-07-19 11:50 PM

you've waited a few days to post

Welcome and great first post

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

2 posted 2002-07-19 11:58 PM

This is a very inspirational poem.Welcome to Passions.I look forward to more of your poems.Look for a special e-mail welcoming you.

paladin

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-07-19 11:59 PM

Awesome poem. Welcome to Passions.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-07-20 07:04 AM

Welcome to Passions, Pegasus. This is a wonderful entry into a new family of poet friends. Look around, enjoy, read, write, and above all...have fun.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-20 08:41 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Beautifully done first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

6 posted 2002-07-20 09:46 AM

What is greater than " Freedom "
Really liked this alot. I could picture an Eagle flying free over the mountains.
I wonder if He is referring to God for He is everything.

pjtalty
Member

since 2002-07-17

Posts 111
W.A., Australia

7 posted 2002-07-20 10:13 AM

A fine example of free verse: images that will evoke different interpretations according to the philosopical outlooks of its readers; effective repetitions; gentle, contemplative tone flowing from keen observation of life and living; confident style.

I liked it very much, more so because it soothes the spirit when turbulent and excites the intellect when dormant.

Thank you.

Patrick Talty

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-07-20 10:21 AM

Pegasus

I enjoyed this spirit filled poem. Welcome to Passions!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2002-07-20 10:37 AM

Welcome - this is just beautiful. What a wonderful way to begin at Passions. I look forward to reading more from you.
Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

10 posted 2002-07-20 12:01 PM

Oh... how I wish I could fly...

Love this poem!!!

Neeraja

Pegasus
Junior Member

since 2002-07-14

Posts 10
Oklahoma

11 posted 2002-07-20 12:08 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments and especially for the hearty welcom to Passions!

Pegasus

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-07-20 01:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful debut, sweet friend, such love and grace fill your words and truly flitter and sigh like the Pegasus of your heart, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Pegasus, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peggy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2002-07-20 01:43 PM

Pegasus~
Welcome~

This is just a beautiful read~
Thank you for sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

14 posted 2002-07-20 02:14 PM

Welcome to passions and I hope to read many more!!

what a wonderful entrance you made...enjoyed it a lot

Charisma

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2002-07-20 03:11 PM

I can see how much we will enjoy having you here already....
may you enjoy being here as much. Welcome to Passions.
As to your sig...we love when writing is from the heart. Enjoyed this much.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2002-07-20 05:01 PM

a lovely poem you breezed in for us.

M

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