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The Gauntlet of Chairs (unfinished)
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The Gauntlet of Chairs (unfinished) |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
The Gauntlet of Chairs I pass through The gauntlet of chairs Battered and bruised By your love I see you at the end of the passageway Hair aglow with flame You float in air Like enchanted silk Beckoning to me With yearning and lust My insides explode Like an Over-microwaved sausage I thirst For your lips |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I LOVE IT!!! This is such a beautifully creative and romantic debut, sweet friend, though I can't wait to see the finished product I love it just the way it is, may this bliss always fill your heart as your words continue to pour with love, I sure hope you continue to share your love words with us all! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-19-2002 08:52 PM).] |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Interesting metaphors.New insights on love.Welcome to Passions.Look for a special e-mail welcome. paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (07-19-2002 09:07 PM).] |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
In the words of Dave Matthews: "Thank you very much everybody" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Very interesting and well done first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I was doing well until I got to the microwaved sausage bit, then your poem cracked me up. Welcome Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Passion & Wit, combined! You're going to like it here! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
I never thought i'd get this many replys so soon thankd |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PurplePoetOnWheels~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Ooo, you're getting the marquee treatment! Welcome, PPOW.She said burn ... together. |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
it doesn't seem unfinished? |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
THE POEM IS NOW FINISHED! The Gauntlet of Chairs I pass through The gauntlet of chairs Battered and bruised By your love I see you At the end Of the passageway Hair aglow with flame You float in air Like enchanted silk Beckoning to me With yearning and lust My insides explode Like an Over-microwaved sausage I thirst For your lips I run towards you I fall through The chocolate ground And land At the entrance to The gauntlet of chairs |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It didn't seem unfinished before. It just seems more finished now. Cool trick! Mike |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
Was this really my first post? I guess it was. Anyway, the poem's still pretty good Vote Kerry/Edwards |
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