Open Poetry #21 |
Lasting Kiss |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lasting Kiss Every woman is stealthily compared to the memory of your best kiss - a teenage bliss. You yearn for that fusion of lust and innocence that doesn’t seem to exist in the full-grown world. Disappointment tugs, crosses from your mind into your new lover’s lips. Sensing your reticence will make her crazy. © 2002 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (07-19-2002 09:31 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Corinne, this is sooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I am 18 and still haven't had my first kiss, I long to share it so much with my drea girl Joanna! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, such nostalgia and wonder fills these feelings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Reminds me of my first kiss that age.We were in the parking lot at a jr.high dance and she shyly looked up at me and said you might as well kiss me.I'm going to tell my mama you did any way. paladin |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Noah! Well, I'd say you are due!!! Thanks for always being so kind and encouraging. Paladin - you should put that line in a poem, it would be great! Cor |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh...what memories this invokes..I'm sure we have a story of our first sweet kiss..your poem brings that to mind. |
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