Open Poetry #21 |
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A Lost Summer |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands ![]() |
For Linda... After she finally understood the truth her heart grew cold… She saw that the brightness had gone from the day… though the sun still shone from a cloudless sky… and she knew… she lost so much more then just a Summer... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thanks Julie! You are so sweet!!! You never miss a poem do you? ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
amazing what knowing the truth can do for a person - hope there are new truths that procide some warming - loved the poem Neeraja - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sad, sweet friend, sometimes the truth hurts but I hope now she goes outside and embraces each new day with a smile and soaks up the sun! (kiss on cheek) This is powerfully bittersweet, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is WONDERFUL! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
The ending of so many summer romances. paladin |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, this is so sad. But what a wonderful write. I liked it very much. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Pegasus Junior Member
since 2002-07-14
Posts 10Oklahoma |
Neeraja Very beautiful yet sad. So many people can relate to knowing hard truths. Pegasus |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
It is so wonderful... to read all the sweet comments on my poems... I appreciate it a lot!!! Thank you so much!!! ![]() |
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