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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2002-07-19 03:01 PM


For Linda...


After
she finally
understood the truth
her heart grew cold…

She saw
that the brightness
had gone
from the day…
though the sun
still shone
from a cloudless sky…

and she knew…
she lost so much more
then just a Summer...






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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-19 03:02 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Neeraja
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2 posted 2002-07-19 03:06 PM


Thanks Julie!  You are so sweet!!!  You never miss a poem do you?


                

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
3 posted 2002-07-19 03:12 PM


amazing what knowing the truth can do for a person - hope there are new truths that procide some warming - loved the poem Neeraja - Paul
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4 posted 2002-07-19 08:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sad, sweet friend, sometimes the truth hurts but I hope now she goes outside and embraces each new day with a smile and soaks up the sun! (kiss on cheek) This is powerfully bittersweet, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-07-19 08:55 PM


This is WONDERFUL!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

paladin
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6 posted 2002-07-19 09:18 PM


The ending of so many summer romances.

paladin

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
7 posted 2002-07-19 09:20 PM


Oh, this is so sad. But what a wonderful write. I liked it very much. Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Pegasus
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since 2002-07-14
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Oklahoma
8 posted 2002-07-19 10:26 PM


Neeraja
Very beautiful yet sad. So many people can relate to knowing hard truths.

Pegasus

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
9 posted 2002-07-25 03:22 PM


It is so wonderful... to read all the sweet comments on my poems... I appreciate it a lot!!!  Thank you so much!!!




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