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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2002-07-19 02:30 PM




Countless times…
I escape the world
by dreaming
my butterfly daydreams

dancing on music
pulled from my memory
your arms around me
heartbeats as one…

so close… so real…

but only

in my butterfly daydreams…




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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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1 posted 2002-07-19 02:45 PM


now I just feel like fluttering off to a daydream - thanks for the wonderful poem - Paul
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-07-19 02:47 PM


Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2002-07-19 02:55 PM


What a wonderful poem for a warm summer day. Makes me wish I had a hammock and could drift off into daydreams.  Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Neeraja
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4 posted 2002-07-19 02:57 PM


You're welcome Paul!  

Neeraja

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5 posted 2002-07-19 08:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, yes, keep on dreaming those sweet beautiful dreams for I know with all my heart they will come true to your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) This is whimsically delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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6 posted 2002-07-25 03:20 PM


It is so much fun... to read all the sweet comments on my poems... I appreciate it a lot!!!  Thank you so much!!!




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