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Stapelton
Junior Member

since 2002-04-16

Posts 13
Canada

0 posted 2002-06-13 08:54 PM

While my tears are hidden.
My thoughts are over ridden,
for the look in my eyes
tells no lies.

Nothing goes deeper than
the pain that is real.
Being me isn't what I
want to be.

Where is my true love?
how come I'm not one of
the lucky ones thinking
about commitments.

When will my old skin disappear,
how can I reflect my life to be glorious.
When I'm alone dreaming of love.

When will the heart ache be healed,
will the truth of my pain ever leave
my eyes.

While my tears are real.
My true self stays hidden,
nothing more can be done.
Until I am completley revealed.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-13 08:57 PM

I like this poem. I hope to read more of your works.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-06-13 08:59 PM

Ah Kathi,
One day when you least expect it...
your prince will just appear..
and you will KNOW he's the one.
Excellent emotive write here.
Very well expressed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-06-13 09:00 PM

many of us are probably still in that healing faze..liked your how you expressed your ideas here, welcome to Passions.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-06-13 09:35 PM

The pain and loneliness of not having a
soulmate are very real...and hurt...

The joy and elation of finding one will
erase those feelings...Hopefully soon
for you...

Chrissypooh
Member

since 2002-02-19

Posts 80
Canada

5 posted 2002-06-15 08:13 PM

I like this poem. I hope to read more of your works.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2002-06-15 09:29 PM

Ahhhhh....how well I know these feelings. You have written from your soul and in that you willl find parts of you that you have lost for a long time. A time will come when happiness is yours but in the mean time you need to learn, again, how to love yourself.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-06-16 02:35 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Kathi, I can feel your tears here but I know deep down with all my heart you will find all your heart desires soon and happiness will be yours to hold forever! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathi, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

8 posted 2002-06-16 02:58 PM

My god, if we all haven't felt this way huh? Nice poem, been there, or should I say AM there...

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

9 posted 2002-06-16 04:48 PM

*hugs* Aw honey...I know this feeling...up until a few months ago this poem described me exactly. One day he'll just appear for you...I promise

I loved reading this...great job...keep your head up =)

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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