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Open Poetry #21

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ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-07-19 12:03 PM

just to reflect
rub off worn neglect
treat myself with an ice-cream
carry hopes on radiant sun beams
listen to summer concert in the park
get set, go, on your mark
underneath to brew ambition
figure ways through caustic tradition
alter shabby clothes to appeal in places
carry a bag of ready made faces
then visit family graves,
tend to horsemen, card held knaves
just to reflect
rub off worn neglect.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-19-2002 12:04 AM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-07-19 12:29 PM

wow...did you really accomplish all that?

nicely done
M

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-19 12:30 PM

Speechless

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-07-19 01:31 AM

This poem gives me a warm fuzzy feeling...
like shabby chic

~ warm hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2002-07-19 09:05 AM

Maureen,

tend to horsemen, no , been on a horse, yes..

Lyra, Loner_23

thanks for sharing

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