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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-18 09:54 PM




My mind is like a canvas
I paint my feelings with my words
I write of all things romantic
My heart soaring with the birds

I like to speak for others
Who have trouble finding their voice
I feel so passionate when I write
What I give of myself is choice

My emotions flow so freely
When I read of someone in pain
Through my words I try to reach them
Sometimes my tears I can't refrain

My writing gives me satisfaction
As I relay my thoughts to you
I feel I am at your mercy
Inside my soul is where you view

If my words can make a difference
Then it has all been worthwhile
The greatest compliment for me
Is if my words have made you smile

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-18 10:19 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, yes, your loving words of love have always made me smile just as your loving and compassionate poems make me cry, your words touch my heart so very much and you inspire me so much, in fact you inspired me in my most recent poem "Green-Eyed Girl" mentioning the garden, I thought of your beautiful garden and I added my daydream to the poem! (kiss on cheek) You are a true delight to me everyday, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
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2 posted 2002-07-18 10:54 PM


You've such a kind heart Sue, your words did help to lift my spirits!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
3 posted 2002-07-18 11:03 PM


Sue:  Your writing accomplishes all you want it to!

Betty Lou Hebert

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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
4 posted 2002-07-18 11:14 PM


Your words have made me smile, many times...Sue.
Thanks for writing them and for sharing them with all of us here at Piptalk.
~ smiles and hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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