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Sudden Blindness (For VAS...challenge)
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Sudden Blindness (For VAS...challenge) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The dance floor cleared and suddenly A blinding Ray in front of me In bloom above, and wilt below Shoes of white, 'neath missle toe In June, to RUMBA, lightly stepped In squinted face, my manners kept In strapless gown, stiletto heel Giving single life a reel The thoughts flashed fast, and did not last A blinding bolt beside me passed In duck and run, full speed on And closed those blinds, alarms upon The dance card full and not so bad A blinding headache all I had Inside my fortress tucked away Recovering this blinding Ray\ Copyright Kkh 7/18/02 **Such fun! Not sure if I hit the Mark...But ducked the Ray...all fun intended. Have a great day!** |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you sure flood your words with such brilliant blinding light, this is spectacular! (kiss on cheek) This is an excellent challege reply, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hehehehehe So Ray is someone you wanted to avoid, right? Did I get it? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The thoughts flashed fast, and did not last A blinding bolt beside me passed In duck and run, full speed on And closed those blinds, alarms upon You're good Diamond Lady! I really liked the fevered frenzy and the flashy style of your ray(s) |
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