Open Poetry #21 |
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love? |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA ![]() |
words rush to the rescue feelings surge from the heart teeth grate at the sounds of heartbreak hearts pound with desire ears burn from thoughtless words palms sweat in anticipation feet itch desiring to run eyes water in sadness noses run after the tears if I didn’t go on you would think this is bad but here is the answer don’t feel like you’ve been had all these things are a part of a lifetime with love it doesn’t always fit like a hand in a glove |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Paul, I couldn't agree with you more, sweet friend, I still yearn to meet Joanna for the first time and I cry a lot because I love her and sometimes get scared I may lose her and she means so much to me, yet I know I'm only loving her more each day! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely wisdom, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Noah - thanks for your read and review and for your loving wisdom - I hope so that your love find all of the completeness you yearn for!!! Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good write Paul and how true! The course of true love never runs smoothly. Keep up the great writing... I'm so pleased you came to Passions! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Nancy - thanks for your very kind comments and encouragement. I bow to you wonderful Enchantress for offering me the chance to be here and to write - it is a humble bow...thanks Paul |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Hi Paul, yes agree with you. Sometimes we are put to go through some rough patches, for us to appreciate the true beauty of love, and reap the happiness it gives. ![]() mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
EXACTLY! This is wonderful. In the mood to smile and this was just the thing. ThisDiamond |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul Love is such a strong force...like a hoop, we jump and sometimes fall..but the beauty of the feeling, is the reason for it all. ![]() |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
So true. You have to take the good with the bad. Enjoyed the read. Deb |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A wonderful poem, Paul... and as with love, the true course of life never runs smooth...and just think how boring it would be if it did. ![]() Lyra |
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