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Open Poetry #21

Concrete Dream Concerto

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-07-23 08:52 PM

Concrete Dream Concerto

to build
     then allow balloons
            to dance in the sky

stairsteps
     on their way
            to Elysian fields’ delight

rock or granite
     offering a foothold
            to heavenly skies of blue

a man’s gift
     to hold in soft regard
            all of the dreams within you

feet on the ground
     holding love in one’s heart
            and a song to long cling onto

stairstep
     one to heaven
            with a melody on your lips

stand solid
     allowing one to dream
            then loving words will slip

be the rock
     to step one to the sky
            to play the music of one’s soul

a concrete dream concerto

02.10.01

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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-07-23 09:07 PM

Ah Karilea...how you make me smile!!
THIS is very special...just like you!
And therefore is a

~Hugs YOU!~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2002-07-23 09:10 PM

Karilea

I think of dreams as floating
not needing solid ground
but you have changed my mind a bit
for many rocks I've found

I'll think of them as stairways now
to places I would flow
for each was special saved for that
to float one first must go

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-23 09:12 PM

(smiles) Wow, oh my gosh, I love the splendor of this, sweet friend, this had me envisioning climbing this staircase to the sky then feeling like falling below but yet it feels like flying! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-07-23 11:28 PM

Do you ever go back and read your first poems here? I think you've progressed so far as a writer (not just a poet). You are amazing!

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