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Existence |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Sitting here, Or if sitting over there, Just somewhere, I don’t care, Before a wall or a window In day light Or all night, Watching electric lights glow, None to call, None at all, People are just gray shadow, So I stare And watch as they come and go. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'm sitting here, not over there, not that somewhere I'd rather be, but it's alright I can handle the night as long as the words, yours, I see.  M it can be lonely...when there is so much distance between the lines. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
sounds lonely....... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This sounds very lonely. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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