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Missing You...
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Missing You... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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I felt nature in your words - Live, fresh and soft green, And I saw light in your eyes - Lustrous kind of sheen. Images of waterfalls Gently followed through, Full of power, yet peaceful Like portraits you drew. Tough nights became so easy When your dreams passed by, Like songs sung in sweet whispers Of a breeze’s sigh. I can see you flying now, High above and free, I know very well that’s where You wanted to be. Amongst white clouds in the sky - Active and unbound, That’s where you always belonged… Love, I miss your sound... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sweet ... tender ... and wonderfully composed Sudir. This is just lovely, much enjoyed!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the loss here is just too real and too close my friend. . . well done. . . but, yes, sad. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Speechless Cold hands means a warm heart |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
So tenderly and lovingly expressed. It's a great read. mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, my friends for your encouraging visit... and kind words of appreciation... Regards, Sudhir. |
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