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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
falling into you awakening to slant light I stagger in my loneliness if I try to stand now surely I will fall I could steady myself with you but you are only the whisper of my dreams the cheek of my pillow the skin of my satin sheet you are not here to hold me up you are not here © 071602 S Arthur |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sad...helen |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
do you need someone to lean on? I like the poem |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Lovely poem, -if life didn't have it's challenges, it wouldn't ever feel like we'd achieved anything .- We'll always be here for you to lean on  . Thanks .L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
so sad Cold hands means a warm heart |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Sad? Perhaps. But actually written with a sense of hope. Thanks for reading. S Arthur |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
beautiful!!!!! no sadness here!! precious Love purely priceless illustrated with finesse! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Exceptional! I like these lines... "the whisper of my dreams the cheek of my pillow the skin of my satin sheet" |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This is also love.... Beautifully written!!! Neeraja |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Arthur, this is sooooo very beautifully sad, sweet friend, I know how you feel because I love my drfeam girl so much yet she lives so far away and I only see her in my dreams! (sigh) my thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Arthur, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! This is wonderful!! ~warm hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
How beautiful, this feeling so forlorn and yearning. This is a wonderful poem, I am touched and I thank you for sharing. Tell me what can drive our spirits to such haunting introspection, why must we seek ourselves by measuring the love of others. SimplyGold |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*deep sigh* Lovely... sorry my critiques seem so bland at the moment...but enjoyed it trust me!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh..go back to sleep... and reawaken, very very slowly... and perhaps she will be there in the shadows... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
S Arthur Grey - sad write of a loss into your loneliness. Been there my friend, have faith, as it will pass... BC |
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