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Gray Wolf Eyes
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Gray Wolf Eyes |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Gray Wolf Eyes I do more than breathe, as sometimes, my hands would fly off if not attached to my wrists so I’ve been told but you… you delight in coming by during the busiest time of day you lean into me whispering “breathe” your gray wolf eyes express that I am too absorbed in all of this before me and your gray wolf grin is concerned in my naïveté, I comply, you grin wider, then I remember… you like round things swelling. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms deca. can visualize this lucky wolf leaning over your shoulder and whispering to you. and I wonder does he know how vulnerable his sheep skin is? very sensual write ms |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooooh Deca girl!!! Oh my...warm where you are today, is it? OH..words escape me...just..OH! Soooo well done..you're sizzling girl. ~Hugs~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca Do you know how to tame a wolf? I'll bet you do...I think you could do it with a poem. Loved this! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deca, are you still breathing? I know I stopped when I read this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful and small. She said burn ... together. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I just love your wonderful style, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* did I lost my breathe somewhere here... love it!!! Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
your gray wolf eyes express that I am too absorbed in all of this before me and your gray wolf grin is concerned in my naïveté, I comply, you grin wider, then I remember… you like round things swelling. Yes...this imagery is haunting and enticing.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Excellent!Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and. . . what lies behind those?? hmmm. . . perhaps that's for another poem. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Swelling...hmmmmmmm...interesting.... enjoyed this...such visions.... |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow! My head would fly off, if not attached to my neck. Heady write, Decaflame! Shenachie |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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