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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-07-16 09:48 PM

Bine winds as bracken
Reaches while Boanerges
Lace the rolling brae

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~*~

Bine – twining stem of a vine
Bracken – various large ferns
Boanerges – sons of thunder
Brae - hillside

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-16 09:49 PM

Cold hands means a warm heart

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

2 posted 2002-07-16 10:11 PM

Karilea, I'm so glad you explained the terms...as it helps me to fully appreciate the beauty of this poem. Simply loved it!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-16 10:11 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this reminded me of a poem I wrote a year and a half ago titled Bonnie Brae, this is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I would love to re-post it for you if you'd like, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-07-16 10:19 PM

Very very pretty...
Great imagery...and I love the pic.
Perfect!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-07-16 10:31 PM

A lovely poem, Karilea....
thanks so much for explaining those terms to us.

~ hugs and smiles

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

6 posted 2002-07-17 01:06 AM

Hi Sunshine!

I was getting ready to run for the dictionary when I scrolled down to your definitions. Thanks. Beautiful picture and beautifully penned.

Shenachie

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2002-07-17 01:21 AM

*Beautiful*!!!!!

Charisma

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2002-07-17 01:34 AM

Karilea,
We are an illiterate lot.

I was reaching for the Bible and actually needed the dictionary. Excellent write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

cherrypoptart
Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 109
state of wordthiness

9 posted 2002-07-17 03:21 AM

Very clever and beautiful....thanks!

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2002-07-17 05:54 AM

regards,
sudhir

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

11 posted 2002-07-17 06:06 AM

Very good, your skilled in useage of words, i'd love to see more poems that you've expanded on.

[This message has been edited by akira (07-17-2002 06:08 AM).]

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