Tempestuous Universe of Arousals (Three Phases so far)

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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-07-16 09:01 PM

Phase One of Many (Probably Four if feedback is positive)

Phase One

I want to live in a fantasy creation
Where my words flow from waterfalls of imaginations
In such a range of colors they defy explanation
In hues so tempestuous they cool the soul
In refreshing mists of penetrating sighs
Setting free the core of such unique verse
In stellar fireworks of awareness
In a spirit roaming for endless possibilities

Translucent wings will search the swirling emotions
With every part of the inner soul meditating peaceful tranquility
Sensuous stimulation in exhilarated flight
Over orchid laced forests of aphrodisiacal arousals
In flower beds of erotic whirlwinds
Of rose pedals on hot lace
Fires of passion will boil here in endless eruptions
Sending words singing into the universe of existence

Lavender daisies whose nectar
Nymphs cultivate for amorous butters
When massaged titillate the outer most reaches
Of the inner space of erotic feelings
In spasmodic movements you quiver in excitement
Sending you down new trails in spells of words
Highlighting every nerve ending in the foreplay
Of the thundering power of free verse
To strike the mountain top in nails of appreciation

In the power of all fantasies
I create this for your pleasure

Phase 2

In a stretch I would create a billion similarities
Each one unique in style and purpose
A flower bed of aromas where one douses with flagrance
But billions mesmerize you in hypnotic trances

A catoptric mind focusing on different shades of light
In mirrors of detailed introspection of clarity
Into a vintage of perception fine tuned to vibrations
Of clairvoyant mental images of peaceful serenity

In extrasensory manipulations of premonitory visions
I would charter a path into clear waters
Where turbulence is desired but not meant to be vicious
In telepathic transportations I would scour the universe

In search of hostile elements of change
Encasing them in imprisoned visions of verse
In volatile independence of beauty
Causing them to meltdown in a fission of medicinal well being

In a comfort of emotion my creations of thought
Would plant the seeds of exquisite verse
That would flower in the heart of you

D.Lester Young (07/17/02)

Phase Three

In such tenderness that I write needing my special blessing
To envision my world in cuddled hope
Caressing the very core of my existence
In the greatest of all emotions

You are the high ground I treasure
The mountain top my words need to reach
To carry into the hills and breathe of your charms
To captivate the storms within rolling passion

In prophetical lyrics my music needs to wrap its arms around you
Capturing every moment of every possible combination
To reach the deepest part of your confines in sweet nothings
To implant myself in the seed of you needing my tempestuous adoration

In fire so intense the heat makes love to you
In a cold that sends chills down my spine
In a heart made so special
That my verse explodes it boundaries into the heavens

Creating new universes in fantasies so fantastic
That my tears are for you in the moisture of pure desires
So in all this verse my body is yours to plunder
With all of nature’s power

D.Lester Young (07/16/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-17-2002 04:56 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-16 09:17 PM

I see the blooming heads
dance in the wind of appreciation...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-07-16 09:29 PM

Amber eyes open~
Daisies waltz with a soft breeze
In three quarter time.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

3 posted 2002-07-17 02:04 AM

So many beautiful expressions written here. Quite an eyeful, very nice indeed.

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-07-17 09:21 AM

Ah, I see you have added to this since I first read and responded yesterday.
I was especially drawn to and enjoyed the feelings in Phase Three...fantastic imagery throughout here..but, something more powerful in the Phase Three write pulled me in, as I said.
This is exceptional writing....enjoyed very much.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

5 posted 2002-07-18 02:07 AM

wow...! sounds like an attempt to describe something that is INDESCRIBABLE . the words you use fly off the screen eagerly, implying an intense fantastical world. this is actually thought-provoking. if words can offer a shimmer, mere word dappling, of what HEAVEN is like ( for what is more fantastical than heaven?), than it must SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! thanks for this

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