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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Late shadows soften Both the heat of day Filled with broiling sun That burned all bared surfaces Until red they swore not touching But begged cooler salve And the desire in my heart To again see you stretched on white cotton Fresh from line with smell of southern wind Your tan limbs a contrast To virginal expanse of king size bed. Instead I now wanted to see you in gloaming The time between, that so much echoed where my heart beat, With softened images of reality and none of the glare From reflected illumined purity Yet time does not stop in progressive seconds Darkness still finds the sky And returns me to the chambers of want Starved perhaps by my own doing And not When will the silk of this touch you? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Speechless Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
can I just jump all into you? the answer is... YES... EGADS...IT'S A FAMILY REUNION!!! KISS ME!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home, Cap'n Ron...you've been awhile at sea...but I think Serenity just spoke for a lot [or is that the lot] of us... don't be a stranger... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Instead I now wanted to see you in gloaming The time between, that so much echoed where my heart beat, With softened images of reality and none of the glare From reflected illumined purity Yet time does not stop in progressive seconds Darkness still finds the sky And returns me to the chambers of want Starved perhaps by my own doing And not GRIN...came back and actually READ your poem... so, I'll tell ya what. I'll spark ya a deal. You FISH. I will just LOOK at you. smiles... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Yet time does not stop in progressive seconds Darkness still finds the sky And returns me to the chambers of want Starved perhaps by my own doing And not When will the silk of this touch you? Welcome back Cap'n...... A beautiful comeback indeed.  ~ welcoming hugsLyra |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm so glad to see you posting, Ron. You have been missed by more than just me, it seems...(smile at Serenity) Such soft sensuality of the mind in that place between...I have been there. Loved the poem! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Loner: Thank you ma'am...but speechless is not neccessarily a good thing... hope it isn't permanent.  Serenity: SMOOCH! nice to see you again as well... Sunshine... my friend... the sea is a mistress..and for me so is work. Thanks for the nice words. Lyra: I'm pleased you dropped in and commented. So very glad to know things are better with you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
martie: many thanks my friend...have missed the writing and commenting as well as all the wonderful people here..alas...I am just dropping in and am afraid my stay may be again limited in time. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! The silk of this just touched me... or I've been touched ..or am touched! Come back here you! Pull up a chair and stay awhile. YOU sir are missed more than you know! ~Welcome home hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Nice to read you, again...no matter how brief the visit. I truly admire your writing, Ron. One blaze of glory - glory |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Beautiful Imagery; Leaves me breathless as well as speechless ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Brilliant enough to hurt the eyes, and plaintive in it's cries. Enjoyed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Enjoyed this so very much... welcome back, Ron... Regards, Sudhir |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh my... this is good. Deb |
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