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Open Poetry #21

hi! coo!

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-07-16 01:56 AM

second day blue-eyes
unsteady gaze at daddy
arms- unsteady nest

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2002-07-16 02:12 AM

first day green stare,
ready, she glares in his eyes,
heart reflected in

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-07-16 02:19 AM

thanks doreen
did this drag an old one out?
or bring about a new one?
twas good nevertheless
BS.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2002-07-16 03:38 PM

a new one spontaneously responding to yours...

thanks for letting me tag on..

i like it when others inspire me and if you ever want to write spontaneously in reply to my work, i'd enjoy that, as well.....

loved your haiku

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-07-16 09:01 PM

tiny fists balling
letting wail loose he rushes
she grasps his finger

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2002-07-17 12:17 PM

thanks sunshine.
babies abounding!
BS.

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