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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
What is love Love is Free Lifting Dearly darling sweetie, Caring sharing talking Singing a song Loyal and strong!! letting go!! staying after you’ve been let go! kissing with all your passion driving in the rain WINKING cheery smiling giving! Powerful starry scaring sometimes! Ahem ::singing:: the sun won’t shine forever so as long as it’s here we might as well Shine together TH-TH-THAT’S ALL FOLKS! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a wonderful and clever capturing of some of the images and feelings of love - thanks for the great read - Paul |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
thanks! i know its not "deep", perhaps juvenille, but its just me being genuine!! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I think that you're not being juvinile, your just being merry, talking about a subject like love, being care-free is a good thing . Lovely sweet poem . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. [This message has been edited by angelswing (07-19-2002 12:37 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the poem. It ROCKS!! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
thanks! |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
sigh. sadly, my view of love is now tainted by melancholy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's all that is needed  |
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