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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-07-16 09:29 AM

Gabriel

          In your shadows waiting-

Raven eyes- -
ghostly desires
silence lost to
pain and longing

Whispers of a chill-
     the night air    cold
you spoke to me
looking down upon my mind

Humbled   by fear--
a calling    in tremendous
echo    love knows,   no   fear
     you slipped  your tongue--
closed my eyes, softly touched my tears

bury the sage,   its time to go
  inside

        who was I too argue?
I,   weary and   tired

Alone    in mystery’s,  darkness
a feeling of comfort  --

Footprints-- my  journals long,
       spilling   my tears
for all who dare to read

     { through the darkness}

      in   distant fires
I heard small voices,

She is crying  tonight, her castle
burning    ‘does it move you’?    -‘yes’-
‘do you    love them’?    -‘yes’-

I am needed
I have given of faith
I am holy in thou name

I trembled before you,
        your   wings    mighty
your heart forgiving

I am needed

She is crying in fear
she is lost and alone
‘does that move you’?  -‘yes’-
‘do you   love them’?    -‘yes’-

I fell to my knees

      weeping

your heart forgiving
I believe in faith

you rested your palms
of wisdom upon my eyes
you will heal

you are needed       there

go    love

~~~~~~~~~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2002-07-16 09:32 AM

Your muse and you must know how happy we ALL are to see this here this morning...welcome home, Lauren...

[This message has been edited by Decaflame (07-16-2002 09:33 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-07-16 09:34 AM

I would echo that, you are needed here. Thank you for sharing your vision.
kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-07-16 09:57 AM

Your poetry never fails to move me, and yes I can feel it deeply moving! So good to have you back Lauren. Love you girl!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-07-16 10:03 AM

Footprints-- my  journals long,
       spilling   my tears
for all who dare to read

     { through the darkness}

      in   distant fires
I heard small voices,

She is crying  tonight, her castle
burning   "does it move you"?    -"yes"-
"do you    love them"?    -"yes"-

I am needed
I have given of faith
I am holy in thou name

I trembled before you,
        your   wings    mighty
your heart forgiving

I am needed

She is crying in fear
she is lost and alone
"does that move you"?  -"yes"-
"do you   love them"?    -"yes"-

=======================================

"for all who dare to read"

not "dare to read" ... NEEDED to read

does it move me...yes ...
do I feel you ... yes ...
do I need you ... yes ...
Do I love you ... yes ...

whispering ...yessssss

I knew you werent going anywhere...
I still need your words too much

for all the words still unspoken ... you already know.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-07-16 10:14 AM

Lauren

Amazing, grace.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-07-16 10:18 AM

I cannot beleve you are able to write something so beautiful, just out of the hospital.
Bless you.
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2002-07-16 10:53 AM

very needed my friend....
so good to have you home...

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Music Maker
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 152
THE ORIGINAL !!!!

8 posted 2002-07-16 11:47 AM

Inspirational !!! No, for once, I am not commenting on the verse ..... Its you !!!
Heal soon, the prayers of this circle of your friends have been truly answered. God (whoever He or She or It is!) really does work miracles.
Kind thoughts and Good wishes,
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2002-07-16 11:51 AM

wonderful poetry - wonderful to see you here again - however healing occurs I am glad that you are healing and are back with us. Paul

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-07-16 11:54 AM

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2002-07-16 11:55 AM

Immense beauty in your poem. Very touching to read.

Deb

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2002-07-16 12:02 PM

Lauren,
I can't say it as well as Janet Marie...so I'll echo - what she said. And welcome home.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2002-07-16 12:38 PM

GreenEyes~
Just lovely~

Prayers answered~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2002-07-16 12:46 PM

~Thank God for answered prayers~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2002-07-16 04:37 PM

I always knew that you could hear the voices of angels. . . now, I have proof. . .

I know that there's more. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2002-07-16 04:41 PM

Very nice...James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2002-07-16 05:57 PM

"I fell to my knees

      weeping

your heart forgiving
I believe in faith

you rested your palms
of wisdom upon my eyes
you will heal

you are needed       there

go    love"

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet Lauren, I know deep down with all my heart the angels have been guiding you with our love and prayers and I am delighted to see you're back! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, dearest friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

18 posted 2002-07-17 08:00 AM

Oh, Lauren, it is so very wonderful to see you back here...our family table was very quiet while you were away. I'm so thankful that all the prayers were heard, and you are penning from your beautiful heart once again. Much love and good thoughts coming your way, dear friend...

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

19 posted 2002-07-17 08:46 AM

Hugs for a speedy recovery, Lauren.
Beautiful poem and picture. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

20 posted 2002-07-17 08:54 AM

wonderful...and welcome back !!! helen

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