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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-07-16 08:22 AM



Absolute Love

The absolute love
that is true
captures the heart
as soon as the wind blows
you know
though a rose is sometimes crushed
there's hope in the next bloom
and a solitude heart
no longer guides
for the breath that is taken
is raptures bliss
not held down by a kiss
but finds truth
in what is freely given
and pure love
wipes away all
riddles of realize
for all is clear
when you close your eyes
and you just know
your absolutely
in love

BloomingRose



[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (07-16-2002 08:25 AM).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-07-16 09:07 AM


Debra darling girl, your writing is always superb and this is no exception. Your ability to write causes me to always smile and think. As always every time I read you I’m both awed and struck dumb with wonder. And if you say if this is you being dumb I can’t wait to see you verbose, I’ll ….. well I don’t know what I’ll do but it will be dire

Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful, I love it utterly utterly utterly, your writing is always filled with such grace. Truly beautiful writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-07-16 09:25 AM


I have to echo Marsha,
It's utterly, utterly wonderful
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-16 07:02 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, yes, the feeling of love is soooooo magical and always you know it is true if it shines! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-07-16 07:08 PM


absolutely written so lovingly...I love your way of speaking of love
*s
M

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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5 posted 2002-07-16 07:34 PM


Marsha~ You are my ray of sunshine today! Thank you for the warm fuzzies!

Kethry~ Warm hugs to you too

Noah~ Thank you my angel

M~ Always a big hug from me to you!

Love you all!

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (07-16-2002 07:35 PM).]

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
Posts 584

6 posted 2002-07-16 09:32 PM


BloomingRose, I gotta tell you that you just wrote an absolutely amazing piece of love!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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