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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-07-16 06:12 AM


I want to take you on a spin
a simple disco "let me in"
I want to let you in "within"
disco ball implosion sin
I want to take you--
glitter grin--
inner light of inner
glimpse...

I need to spin
upon a thread
glitter
lighting up
the dead
a spark b'neath
a fingertip
will b'queath'd
of satin lip...

I need a thread
on gold of wheel...

I need to feel
I need it real...?

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-07-16 06:42 AM



Let's see...does it start with a "D"?

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2002-07-16 06:49 AM


well I'm stumped...hmmmm.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-07-16 07:26 AM


ahem...sunnyone...lol...there is a double entendre' and? you've got it half right...lol...I'd roll me eyes? but? not sure if I am in control...painful shtuff, that! <---karen had to concentrate
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4 posted 2002-07-16 12:38 PM



well then, half right...is there a "season" involved?  [If'n I'm right, I don't want to be giving it away...]

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THE ORIGINAL !!!!
5 posted 2002-07-16 12:44 PM


Sunnyone is MY Sunshine !!!!
Are we a bit mixed up here Serenity? LOL
Nice one!
Kind thoughts....
John XX

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-07-16 12:49 PM


DING DING SING...

Karilea (music maker...see? gets the grand prize) she wins...the complete hits of Donna Summer...THE WHOLE CD! yuk yuk...

and an all inclusive tour package of mississippi gulf coast casino concerts! and? 5,000 nickels to play in the slot machine! (oh be patient, that little old lady will give up soon!)



luv ya lady!

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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-07-16 12:55 PM


Hey!  Is the game over??
I just got here and didn't get a chance to play...
Next time..holler louder!
~Hugs YOU~
*I'm off to paint a rock or two*

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8 posted 2002-07-16 01:04 PM



Whoop! Whoop! Whoop!  I NEVER win...but the clues were so LOUD...too much fun...glad I came back to check in....

I'll take those nickels, and we'll have FUN!

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