Open Poetry #21 |
a stone's agree |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I put my headphones on I find my favorite song-- I whisper rocking in the tune-- praying one half moon to full... I take myself down off the shelf-- dust of me is glittered self as I spin myself awake as I keep the human daze... There is nothing, none can do. To stop the music, stop the tune. Mathematics, rhythmatized... I spin in tune--I'm realized. I'll reverse the universe-- I'll dance and sing until the curse is set within a stone's agree-- music, is myself...set free. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like it. Enjoyed! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
exactly *sighing* Lovely..just utterly lovely... I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To dance is to set the spirit free, for me. Love the feeling that sings in this. PS..enjoyed your driveway story..thanks. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
music, is myself...set free. Damn, where did I put my headphones? Could see ya dancin' there, K. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I'll reverse the universe-- ========================= I believe you just did. Music will definitely do it for ya. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, yes, yes! You too, dissolve, revolve within a rhythm. ~wranx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! How I love music .. And I love this! ~Hugs~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Rock on!!! -Bob |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'I whisper rocking in the tune-- praying one half moon to full... I take myself down off the shelf-- dust of me is glittered self' LOVE the thought of your 'glittered self'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No WONDER I'm dizzy! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Mathematics, rhythmatized... I spin in tune--I'm realized. I'll reverse the universe-- I'll dance and sing until the curse is set within a stone's agree-- music, is myself...set free. I like your idea of music, Karen... and of course, your poem. ~ musical hugs Lyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling thanks to all--the title was a toss up---I decided on "a stone's agree" because I figured the title "Keith Richards Nods" could be construed as "drug" title...grin.. am I bad? I YAM. (BUT NOT AS BAD AS KEITH...Ain't that right, buddy...er..keith? KEITH? WAKE UP!! ) thanks guys. |
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