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Open Poetry #21

Amazing is the sunshine..

ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-07-15 09:15 PM

It's amazing how the sunshine,
Can hide from you sometimes,
The tears taste sour as they fall,
From child like, crying eyes.

It's unforgettable how the memories,
Can live inside so long,
Will wear a path beyond your smile,
To make my pain, thier home.

It's inconceivable, the midnight,
Can whisper how it does,
Softly now, but still it hurts,
Bleeding through your touch.

It's unexplainable how the happiness,
Is less apparent than the grief,
Clingly loosley to your words,
Knowing eventually, you'll leave.

It's unforgivable that my soul,
Can love as deeply as it has,
When shattered dreams, soon will fade,
And you will be my past.

It's amazing how the sunshine,
Lives inside your eyes,
The loving way you hold me,
Even when you say, goodbye.

A heart can only truly break, once it learns to love completley.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-15 09:38 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amber, I am so sorry to hear of your yearning, but this is sooooooo beautiful and I know the sunshine will shine upon you again and again as love will always find a way! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2002-07-15 09:47 PM

Feelings hold true when they run deep.
Well written poem from the heart.

Deb

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2002-07-18 03:18 AM

You shine in this poem Ambs!!! I can tell your emotions are swirling about and you will land FEET first..it runs in the family!!! (cat-like randy and all)

Especially liked this:
It's unexplainable how the happiness,
Is less apparent than the grief,
Clingly loosley to your words,
Knowing eventually, you'll leave.

all too true...you are wise beyond your years me sis...*wink*

wanna I should pounce you a bit??

I miss you!!!
love ya sis!!
Tanya

*bump*

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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