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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-07-15 09:03 PM



Evening warmth blows in
on summer breeze
gently cradling the earth

~Silence~
The wind whispers with
the cries of nature sounds
as Luna graces the world
with light born of night.

A galaxy of stars
upon a far off skyline
~Illuminated~
like neon candles
in the dark of night,
and I....

I can be nothing
but amazed
with reverant awe
at the beautiful artwork
of the creators hand.

~Treasure~
there is none finer
that one can behold
than that of the
Makers Masterpiece.




Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-15-2002 09:06 PM).]

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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2002-07-15 09:07 PM


Hello Donna

More stunning images you have given us from your fine palette of words.....beautiful!

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-07-15 09:09 PM


Oh what a beautiful picture you paint here, Donna.
~ hugs of beauty

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-15 09:25 PM


Beautiful Donna...and oh so very very true!
You have penned this perfectly,
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-15 09:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, the Creator's artwork is the most dazzling of all and nothing can compare to its splendor! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

texasrose
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since 2001-10-24
Posts 146

5 posted 2002-07-17 06:20 AM


Lovely piece of art you have created while viewing his.  
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida
6 posted 2002-07-17 08:05 AM


So true, and this poem is another masterpiece.
Beautifully written!

Deb

Toerag
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Ala bam a
7 posted 2002-07-17 08:25 AM


True words.....liked this oh gentle one..
Paul Wilson
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8 posted 2002-07-17 09:45 AM


A masterpiece in itself. I always enjoy your poems.
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