Open Poetry #21 |
out of reach |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Out of reach ~*~ Her fondest wish seems far away like a tiny flower cast out to sea drifting among the angry waves I thrust myself overboard but she's just out of reach refusing to give up the chase I enter the race battered by waves tossed by the wind I pray I can save her in the end BloomingRose |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Prayer helps...James |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What beautiful imagery...you made me want to reach out and make the attempt to capture that wish as well...THIS is poetry... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggssssssss) Oh debra, this is soooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, prayer is always the best way to reach out to someone you love and to guide them with comfort! (sigh) This is sadly touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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