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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-07-15 04:18 PM


Out of reach
~*~

Her fondest wish seems far away
like a tiny flower cast out to sea
drifting among the angry waves
I thrust myself overboard
but she's just out of reach
refusing to give up the chase
I enter the race
battered by waves
tossed by the wind
I pray I can save her
in the end


BloomingRose


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-07-15 04:21 PM


Prayer helps...James
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What beautiful imagery...you made me want to
reach out and make the attempt to capture that wish as well...THIS is poetry...

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3 posted 2002-07-15 09:53 PM




(big huggssssssss) Oh debra, this is soooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, prayer is always the best way to reach out to someone you love and to guide them with comfort! (sigh) This is sadly touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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