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Beautiful Smile
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful Smile Chung you dear sweet waitress I can barely wait to give my order to you. I'll have bacon and eggs and coffee and a beautiful smile I've ordered too. You're my favorite waitress. Perfect in almost every way. You have only one fault that's disagreable to me. You married another man. Why didn't you wait for me? JamesLee July14 2002 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ya can't win them all James......Often thought this way myself....good write! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know how it feels. I have liked a lot of guys that did that. Good write! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
James, been there, felt there..darn those wasted opportunities!  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Well darn! Guess your gonna have to find another to be smitten with! Deb |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
But James...at least you get to look at her every day! There are some blessings, you know... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Aw, I know how you feel, sweet friend, unfortunately not everything can go our way, but still may she always be a wonderful friend to you and may you spend the happiestfuture with your Jin! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
guess life is sometimes a good breakfast and a lovely moment but feeling incomplete - I enjoyed your poem - Paul |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello James This one certainly brought a smile to my face which I'm sure was your intention. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
At least you were able to turn her into a great poem, James... And I bet you've found someone else by now.  ~ hugs for a broken heartLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sometimes your eggs are sunny side up... and sometimes they're scrambled. Good write here James! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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