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Open Poetry #21

Here Comes the Rain?

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-06-13 08:48 AM

This sunless morning of clouds and possible rains,
To cool the streets and flush out the cluttered drains,
Will the wind come to scour the dirty red bricks
And shake the trees knocking out the old dead sticks.

Will it catch me and drench me as I wait on the street,
With nowhere better to go to and no one to meet.
Then when rained upon and breeze blown to dry
Will any one have noticed this was my time to cry.

This sunless morning of clouds and possible rains,
Will it flush away my loneliness and lingering pains
Scour my sadness with it’s cool and pure drops
Making the aching I’m feeling to finally stop

Will the rains pass on and clouds give way to the sun,
Another day in the light and still being no one.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-06-13 10:55 AM

I sit here waiting
for the coolness to come
for the rains to pour
for the cleansing of fresh
and the breezes and more...

too humid for me...at the moment...
*s
M

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

2 posted 2002-06-13 12:35 PM

With nowhere better to go to and no one to meet.
Then when rained upon and breeze blown to dry
Will any one have noticed this was my time to cry.

amazing is all i have to say

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-06-13 07:24 PM

I really like this. As we have NO rain here, I usually equate MY dry spell romantically with that...hmm...should I ever see rain again, I will think of this poem and wonder.

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