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Blind Hope
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Blind Hope |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
Blind Hope. I step into another gray day, sheltered by your presents Summoning my ability to "go-on", I drag these scraps of happiness from the of the corner of the room, and walk forward in blind hope. My virgin bruised heart musters what dignity remains. Not a vestige of truth is allowed, nor faith in better days; In reverence I'm draped in your smile clenching these treasured memories. Am I provoked by those happy times, when I knew I loved you, and you loved me. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice writing! I like the way it moves forward with hope for something, but expecting nothing. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I definitely agree with Kris, Daniel... It is very nicely done and I like the way it leaves the door open for future hope.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
words straith from the heart, wonderful done! Charisma btw any change you are from Holland too? |
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