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akira
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0 posted 2002-07-14 07:19 PM




A Simple Rose


I asked for a rose
It was a simple task
Yet you forgot of what i asked

You didnt seem to notice my tears
You forgot I too had my own fears

Fate had delt me an unfair hand
Yet I knew in my heart you would always be my man
You were the only one I knew, how could I forget you

I asked for a simple task
I asked for only a kiss to let me know it would last
Your kiss you gave with tender care
You said you were sorry
That it wasnt to late, you changed fate
I asked for a rose
It was simple task
You met that task and at last
Created your own fate
You proved its never too late





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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-14 10:20 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-14 11:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love your wonderful words, may this rose of love always bloom in your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Akira, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krishankins
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3 posted 2002-07-15 12:11 PM


Nice turn around at the end. I like it!
akira
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4 posted 2002-07-15 12:24 PM


thank you all for your responses...it means alot to me..if you'd like to talk to me online my Aol/aim name is mjhawaii50 or if you have yahoo messenger its Akiras_Fire

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira

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