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If Only I Could |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Hear the words flow feel the softest of touch Listen to a lullaby I miss you much Hear the beat of a heart as love flows through a vein Memories of my child thoughts that will remain Rest my little one, do not fret keep our hearts within your own Sleep my darling in your bed this love we have, not alone. Feel the flowers bend to touch Hear the birds softly sing Know we are waiting to hold Know we are doing everything. My little one, precious child My darling of my rushing blood Be patient for just a while I’d be there if only I could |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could be everywhere our children were? I guess that's why God made grandparents...to be there for the children when the folks have their hands busy... a tender piece, Magnus...very tender, very nice... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry This one really pulled at my heartstrings, so very beautiful. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart and keeper of the stars incandescent shine, this reflection of your soul’s care is one of the best, the very best I’ve ever read by you. You have in this wonderful flow of words written your heart, you’ve shown me a glimpse of the soul that lies within wrapped in love and touched by harmony. In this utterly perfect poem you’ve excelled yourself yet again. This is truly exquisite writing and I love it love it love it utterly. As always darling heart YOU are perfection personified and I love it. Sing sweetly dear poet and your words will waft on the wings of night. Truly gorgeous writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So gently spoken...soft as a lullabye. Beautiful Barry.... ~Caring Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If only~ Beautiful poetry Magnus~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've given us a glimpse at that beauty-FULL heart of yours Barry... this one touches deep within my mommy strings!!! take care sweetie!!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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