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Open Poetry #21

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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-07-14 05:46 PM

candied cherry
               chute
   the chute
a lingering kiss of crème de menthe
a crepuscular vein meandering
meditation
                  of
           levity
mitigating
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         ity
                           extenuating
                  thighs
where silken stoles are woven
terrifying instigation
ignition configuration
metal proven over time
rust / dust / slime

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-07-15 04:24 PM

you've really got this cummings thing down pat walt. . .

great job . . . needs to be seen more. . . yes. . .

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Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-07-15 04:28 PM

Hmmm, interesting.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

3 posted 2002-07-15 08:13 PM

Holy Retro,Bat Man.Reminds me of some of the poems written back in the sixties.Right on.Like groovy man.I dig this kind of jive.

paladin

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

4 posted 2002-07-16 09:35 PM

i like the meandering of the poem. also, i think that every dame deserves "a lingering kiss of crème de menthe..." quite vivid!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2002-07-16 10:07 PM

thank you all to the groovy mule

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