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| Open Poetry #21 |
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What did you say it was again? |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
It was supposed to be a poem My anger still yet ever present to guide the pen Fueled by this hurt inside me Here is how it started My bag grows full The weight heavy Pain unbearable Once Once? Once what What could I possibly put I cannot even begin to describe my feelings The fact that I would love to just beat the tar out of Out of what I just do not know Who am I supposed to be mad at I would If I found it If only I could see How could I win Death Naw, someday by natural causes if I am lucky I know I will face that Yet that day is far away, not today All I ever wanted was to be there for you Show you how life could be Pushed me away Lied to me I wish that I could find away to smash these walls Clasping the walls that stand between us Everyday I wonder if you recognize who I am Who I was How hopeless I am How lost can I be Will I ever turn around Will I ever find a way This was supposed to be a poem My anger still yet ever present to guide the pen Fueled by this hurt inside me Lost to found again [This message has been edited by baerlon (06-13-2002 12:20 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of feelings here...James |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Wow, very emotional....really well written. I'm so sorry for your pain  Tai |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
James and Liltai thx for posting the replies. Lots of feelings yes but i still don't know what to do with them. There's a peace inside us all |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I don't know what to do with those feelings, either. But you expressed them well. Perhaps that is a step to getting them to leave you in peace. Sandra |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a poem. Angry or not. And it's effective too. Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
baerlon Enjoyed the read. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
You will find ways to channel thst energy..strong write  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very strong poem here. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! What a 'vent' this poem is! Also became an amazing piece of work. Well done! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
After that you'd have to feel a little bit better....Just from the venting alone..... Good poem........Love the intensity of the frustrated hurt so well portrayed! |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
thank you all, i am flattered by your kind words. the encouragment is much needed There's a peace inside us all |
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